Sunday, 29 January 2012

Falling Isn’t As Easy At It Looks


The single slit-like window was high up and out of harm’s way. A window from which the outside world could not be glimpsed, flowers could not be viewed, and clouds could not be seen.

But moonlight did manage to find its way in, falling on Amanda’s unflickering eyelids and changing her otherwise pallid complexion lunar blue.

She sat there in silence gently rocking. An intangible silence growing ever more deadly since the departure of the last visitor.

No one visited any more.



* * *


Ripples of contacts once encircled her, just as they do all of us. Acquaintances in the outermost rings described Amanda as bright and breezy. But stripping away the layers to the much smaller circles of friends and a very different woman was described; aloof, austere and introverted.

Scratching deeper still, there was only one really close friend. With the emphasis on ‘was.’

Marisa just disappeared one day. Local rumours fuelled tabloid stories about pig farms and sausage factories.

“Sausages?” Amanda blithely dismissed the gossip, “As if you’d dispose of anyone so poisonous in food!”

The police left few stones unturned. But in turning them they covered all the tracks they would have preferred to have found. Almost as if some perverted genius had planned it that way.

Marisa certainly had existed, but detectives found precious little evidence of the fact.



* * *


Preceding Marisa’s disappearance there were a number of ‘incidents’ in Amanda’s family which were never adequately explained. In reality, they were rather more than incidents, and included the untimely demise of her mother no less.

Although Amanda was the linchpin, the connection between a lot of suspicious happenings, the police could find neither evidence nor motive. She might still be able to help with their enquiries though.

At precisely the same time as the sirens were switched on, Amanda slipped and fell.

A raised floorboard, a lumpy carpet, a loose shoe . . . it was a complicated series of events, but then falling isn’t as easy as it looks.

By the time the wailing had subsided, Amanda was in the foetal position on the bathroom floor with a fractured skull.

The police took the decision to move her to a psychiatric secure unit and monitor her condition. There she sat, like a living ghost. A freezing atmosphere surrounded her that you could almost touch.

Interrupted only by doctors opening her eyelids and shining lights into her black, distant eyes. Far beyond interviews and lie detectors now.

Moonlight may still get into Amanda’s cell, but no one and no thing could penetrate her any more. She’d escaped. And with her, she’d taken secrets from the world; was she the perpetrator or a victim?




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  1. Nicely done with chilling results... and I'd love to know who done it... and what might have been in that sausage I had on my pizza tonight... hmmm....so many questions you've raise in my poor little brain as I head for bed.

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    1. Oh, they only use the nicest sausages to put on pizzas, Lorelei. But that’s the only question I’m at liberty to answer ;)

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  2. Wow! That was really good and VERY intriguing...
    Hope you are doing well!

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    1. Thanks very much indeed, Pat.

      And, yep, doing great thanks :)

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  3. sad...beautiful....loved the first para..the moon beam penetrating...beautiful expression...

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    1. Thanks a lot, Flying high in the sky. Sad indeed. But the next post might be happier. I’ll certainly try :)

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  4. Lovely, beautifully written, but no more sausages for me!

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    1. Thanks, Valentina. Don’t worry, it actually makes the sausages taste better - or, so I’m told :)

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  5. Cool piece:) I like your groovy blog:)

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    1. Thank very much, Mark. And thanks ever so much for dropping by and following :)

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    1. I’m not sure yet, Julie. In my mind there’s potential for more, but we’ll both have to just wait and see :)

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  7. Loved it. However, I think I'll be a full time vegetarian from now on #thank you.:)

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    1. Thank you, Helene. It’s a job to know quite which to decide, isn’t it; Vegetarianism or cannibalism?

      Thanks for dropping by :)

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  8. Oh my. This is fantastically eerie. I particularly love the line: “As if you’d dispose of anyone so poisonous in food!” Solid ending, too. ;)

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    1. Thank you, Jayne. It was fun to write. I’ve a few more ideas and may develop it someday. Thanks for dropping by :)

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  9. Chills...you are on good form! This one actually scared me a little :)
    Katy xxx (AKA Superman Sammy's mom )

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    1. I just thought I’d try to break out of the usual mould with this one, Katy. I quite enjoyed it though, and may go back to it from time to time.

      It scared you? It scared me, and I wrote it ;) xxx

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